Creative Thinking For Designers - Re-design an advertisement

Evolution or Revolution
Task : Pick an advertisement (Print Ad, TVC, RC, etc ) of a known brand of any kind. Analyse how you can do it better.

  First i got four ideas saving water, saving electricity, Fur is murder, Do not cry （help Africa children). I want do some meaningful thing, so i choose help Africa children.

 I chose this advertising because the message are not really clear. I think the point is about no food, hungry, skinny, dies.

At first I thought with big eyes, belly, and background is map of Africa plate to express.

I used black and red color to a strong contrast and i want people attractive this poster. I design a map of Africa plate like bleeding， because they do not have a food and too many people died.